I like your title! It's very engaging. The standup is a tad opinionated but still convincing. Some more interviews and less shots of the cigarettes would have helped.
Hello! Pretty well composed video, good interview and lots of shots of the problem. The hairbrush though.. it was a little distracting and almost made the video seem like a joke to me.
I was just trying to add some humour to it. I don't see how it was distracting. Plus, it was more comfortable for me, as I wouldn't have known what to do with my hands otherwise.
I'm not entirely sure what the issue is here. You say that cigarettes are bad for the environment, but never elaborate on how. Aside from maybe air pollution, there's really nowhere for the contents of the cigarette to go. And they can't go downward, because they're mostly being being put out on concrete or asphalt.
Your establishing shots are also far too long, and all but one of them show the same thing over and over again. It almost feels like padding.
If you can't figure out what the issue is, then that's your problem. It's pretty self-explanatory. The shots are only five seconds max long, so no, they aren't far too long. Maybe you should take a look at your own video before you criticize someone else's.
Good job on covering a topic that many people overlook! Your still shots did a great job on showing the issue too. However,Some people might be offended by your opening statement! Good work !
I like your title! It's very engaging. The standup is a tad opinionated but still convincing. Some more interviews and less shots of the cigarettes would have helped.
ReplyDeleteHello! Pretty well composed video, good interview and lots of shots of the problem. The hairbrush though.. it was a little distracting and almost made the video seem like a joke to me.
ReplyDeleteI was just trying to add some humour to it. I don't see how it was distracting. Plus, it was more comfortable for me, as I wouldn't have known what to do with my hands otherwise.
DeleteI'm not entirely sure what the issue is here. You say that cigarettes are bad for the environment, but never elaborate on how. Aside from maybe air pollution, there's really nowhere for the contents of the cigarette to go. And they can't go downward, because they're mostly being being put out on concrete or asphalt.
ReplyDeleteYour establishing shots are also far too long, and all but one of them show the same thing over and over again. It almost feels like padding.
If you can't figure out what the issue is, then that's your problem. It's pretty self-explanatory. The shots are only five seconds max long, so no, they aren't far too long. Maybe you should take a look at your own video before you criticize someone else's.
DeleteGood job on covering a topic that many people overlook! Your still shots did a great job on showing the issue too. However,Some people might be offended by your opening statement! Good work !
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